I have posted the next chapter to the short story I am writing. I mentioned on a previous post, earlier in the week, that I was having a difficult time with this next part. I have to admit, that it is challenging, and I’m not sure I capture anything/everything that could be important to the setting, the characters or even the story line itself. But, I also believe that this is a learning experience as much as anything else. So, although I am self-conscious, please don’t let that deter anyone from offering some criticism to assist me in developing this story further.
Thank you, and I look forward to your comments.